Chinese Language Learning – Homework Final

Hi! I’m a second year chinese student and I’ve been preparing for this final for 2 weeks now. We are voicing over a Phone Call scene in a movie or tv show and I am submitting a script and video+audio recording. The script is basically a conversation between the 2 parties. I am fairly confident in my script, but of course it is always nice to have a second opinion. (Hopefully this isnt against the rules) and there’s absolutely no obligation to read it over. If you want to laugh at my poor chinese you absolutely can. Below I listed the required grammar needed (they are all used in the script). Any grammar mistakes you see, I would greatly appreciate to be pointed out. Thanks!

P.S All ***bold and italicized*** sentences are ones im rocky on. I put the intended translation below them

P.S.S As I see corrections I’ll **update** this post

1. Make YES/NO question
2. Make WH questions
3. The particle 的Function #1 Possession withFunction #2 adjective + 的 + noun
4. A-NOT-A question
5. Indicate past tense using 了
6. Indicate future tense using 要7.就Function #1 as soon as, …以后,就…Function #2 sooner than expectedFunction #3 indicates the close relationship betweentwo clauses8.一边…一边…
7. 正在 + verb
8. 除了…以外,还…
9. 能 or 会
10. 因为/要是…,…就…

P.S: I know the content is weird… please just ignore it.

喂!你打电话 ”Mario‘s 披萨“。您有什么需要的?

Wei! Ni da dian hua Marios Pisa. Nin you shenme xu yao de?

喂。 我们想要点四张披萨。能不能?

Wei. Women xiang yao dian si zheng pisa. Neng bu neng?

好。四张披萨。还要别的吗?

Hao. Si zhang pisa. Hai yao bie de ma?

上次我给你打电话很慢。这次能快点吗?

***Shang ci wo gei*** ***ni da dian*** ***hua hen man. Zhe ci neng*** ***kuai*** ***dian ma?***

好。对不起。我们今天会做得更快。这就是全部?

Hao. Dui bu qi. Women jintian hui zuo de geng kuai. Zhe jiu shi quanbu?

我会问大家。你么想吗?当我问以后,就他们想一些东西。我可以再买五个吗?

Wo hui hui dajia. Ni me xiang ma? Dang wo wen yi hou, jiu tamen xiang yixie dongxi. Wo ke yi zai mai wu ge ma?

你现在再参加派对吗?

Ni xianzai zai canjia paidui ma?

***对,大派对。要是他们像一些,就我还有三个。一,二,三,四,五,六。。。***

***Dui, da paidui. 要是***

Yes, very big party. If you have that, ill have 3 more. One, two, three, four, five, six…

啊啊啊???!!

Aaaaaa?

还有更多。Hugo,Summer,Hans,Fute?我想另一张披萨。我想那个一起菠萝。

Hai you geng duo. Hugo, summer, Hans, fute? Wo xiang ling yi zhang pisa. Wo xiang nage yiqi boluo.

***你想除了这个以外,还你不想菠萝皮萨马?***

***Chu le…..yi*** ***wai, hai***

Do you want all of those except this one to be pineapple?

我可以问大家。大家好,你想不想跟多菠萝披萨。。啊好。对,我们想更多的菠萝皮萨。Claire 爱菠萝 披萨。 sheeesh

Wo keyi wen da jia. Dajiahao, ni xiang bu xiang gen duo boluo pisa… a hao. Dui, women xiang gen duo de boluo pisa. Claire ai boluo pisa. Sheeesh

Claire?我喜欢那个名字。

Claire? Wo xihuan nage mingzi

漂亮的名字。Oh 也,我的朋友 Andy 说你有鸡?

Piaoliang de mingzi. Oh ye, wo de pengyou Andy shuo ni you ji?

谁是Claire?她可爱吗?我单身你知道。

Shei shi claire? Ta keai ma? Wo danshen ni zhidao.

没有。没有人喜欢她。我。。

Mei you. Mei you ren xihuan ta. Wo–

为什么?

Why?

***她不可爱就被可爱。***

She is cute only sometimes

***我喜欢。我还是喜欢她。我喜欢她地性格。***

I like her. I still like her. I like her personality

你不认识 Claire

Ni bu renshi Claire

***我觉得我喜欢。我可以聊天吗。***

I think I like her. Can I chat

***她一边吃菜一边说。***

She talks while eating

***Yi bian*** ***yi*** ***bian***

没关系。

Mei guan xi

。。Claire 曾经是我的女朋友了

Claire cengjing shi wo de nu pengyoule.

对不起!我不知道!

Sorry! I didn’t know!

***不!没关系。她会回来。我们曾经谈过恋爱。她***

No! Its okay. She’ll be b ack. We used to be together. She cheated.

哪里还有谁?

Na li haiyou shei?

我会看。。大家!啊,Claire 要走了。 对不起

Wo hui kan..da jia. A, claire yao zoule. duibuqi

***等等等! Claire 是漂亮。我不服。我不在乎她是否胖。告诉她我觉得她很漂亮。她是完美。我得***

***有她。我们会在一起很完美。我们和一起做披萨。它可以把她全部吃掉。我们可以一起快乐。***

Wait wait! Claire is pretty. I am not convinced. I don’t care if she is fat. Tell her I think she’s beautiful. She is perfect. I have to have her. We will be perfect together. We can make pizza together. She could eat it all. We can be happy together.

Wow。。。你爱Claire

Wow…. ni ai Claire

我真的

Wo zhen de

***哦,偶的上地,她刚中强!***

Oh, shes on the ground. She’s been shot!

不不!!!

Bu bu!

***啊啊啊!!! 她刚中强。塌下来了!塌下来了!我要报警!***

A!! She;s been shot! She fell down! She feel down! I’m going to call police!

***CLAIRE!!!!***

****hangs up****



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